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Looks promising.
ReplyDeleteinteresting set up, but the dr's son character.... ugh, please write him out already...
ReplyDeletecan't wait. But please, no more of the doctor and his son. They completely ruin the show's time...
ReplyDeleteGood try at spreading out the exposition between characters. A little bit obvious but ok.
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