I read it because I was bored and eh.. the trailer basically includes the biggest moments of this script and the whole "waking up at his neighbor's bed" is just wtf. I can already guess there'll be a love triangle between Stephen\Cara\Astrid, yay.. I'll still give it a shot though and hope the pilot itself is better than this script.
Which also guarantees the *one* female member of the team will be a crappy damsel-in-distress, who spends far more time deliberating between possible boyfriends (preferably ones who have nearly killed, raped and/or abused every last loved one of hers, because that's so sexy) than kicking ass or having an actual storyline.
That would probably be the girlfriend Astrid since there's only one girl at the Tommorow people's team (vs. 3 guys.) I think they need to add more female characters to the actual storyline already..
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ReplyDeleteIs this a transcript or a badly formatted script?
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ReplyDeleteI read it because I was bored and eh.. the trailer basically includes the biggest moments of this script and the whole "waking up at his neighbor's bed" is just wtf. I can already guess there'll be a love triangle between Stephen\Cara\Astrid, yay..
ReplyDeleteI'll still give it a shot though and hope the pilot itself is better than this script.
Why an effing love triangle? Its pointless!
ReplyDeleteBecause it's Julie Plec?
ReplyDeleteThat explains a lot, Idek she was involved.
ReplyDeleteShe and Greg Berlanti from Arrow so I expect a TVD/Arrow mix. It could work.. but those darn triangles will definitely be there.
ReplyDeleteThat's good to know.
ReplyDeleteWhich also guarantees the *one* female member of the team will be a crappy damsel-in-distress, who spends far more time deliberating between possible boyfriends (preferably ones who have nearly killed, raped and/or abused every last loved one of hers, because that's so sexy) than kicking ass or having an actual storyline.
ReplyDeleteThat would probably be the girlfriend Astrid since there's only one girl at the Tommorow people's team (vs. 3 guys.) I think they need to add more female characters to the actual storyline already..
ReplyDeleteOh jesus... I don't want a love triangle but if you do one, at least do it right. Nothing like TVD.
ReplyDeleteActually, Cara is in no way a damsel-in-distress not sure about Astrid though.
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